Update--packing and song updates

[binaryalchemist]

First--I have seen the first two verses of "Soul Within The Steel" and they had me in tears. I have also worked out my harmonies. Epic.

Second: The first verse of "Grandma Shot The Baron"

Grandma shot the Baron with her Death Ray
At our Beetleburg Oktoberfest--
Call the guards, but please don't tell her sponsor
She's flunked another Breathalizer test....

She had sworn she would stay sober
Once we turned our backs, she drank
Stripping down to just her goggles
She demolished City Hall in Grandpa's clank
Seemed she was a bit embarassed
That some missles missed their mark--
'Cause it demeans the reputation
Of a Transylvania Polygnostic Spark!
(chorus)

And I'm still f@#$ing PACKING!!!! ::grumbles and checks the dryer again::

Comments

[dragonimp.livejournal.com]

You HAVE to make a recording of Soul Within the Steel.

[binaryalchemist.livejournal.com]

I personally can't wait to see the final lyric--it's not maudlin...it's just perfect. I showed Teri the scene where the Armor meets The Body and since she has trouble reading subtitles I did the voices for her--and that's what the song is about--and Al's heartrending decision to turn away so he could fight for others. My original lyric was good...THIS is perfect.